The place I was born,
its beautiul there.
The summers, the winters,
great weather everywhere.
Sometimes its windy,
sometimes it rains,
sometimes its sunny,
and sometimes its plain.
The ocean is calm,
the ocean is rough,
the wave are rolling,
the waves are tough.
The rain comes down,
all over town,
its what I call home,
Hawaii,
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13 comments:
I like your entry because it describes Hawaii really nicely! I can imagine how great it's there!
Gracie
Miranda,
this poem is really good! i like it a lot because most of it rymes. I want to visit Hawaii sometime.
Good Job,
Emma
I like reading this because it caught my eye and it really cool you lived there. Lucky.
Hey Miranda,
I remember when you wrote that poem, and me and Izzy helped you find the right words that rhymed.
I like your poem because it describes Hawaii really well (even though I have never been there). Hawaii sounds great!
Hannah
i liked your poem because it is very original.
I really like this entry becuase it describes Hawaii so well, you made it rhyme really well.
I Like it because you describe Hawaii so well and perfectly!
Good Job!
~Kate
maranda I liked your poem beacuse It ryhmd and It was desriptive about hawii.
I like this post because it really explains Hawaii.
does it really rain in hawaiibecause it is like the hotest state
Hey i love this because it is a very beautiful and deffinatly describes Hawaii!
I really want to go to Hawaii now because the way you describe it, the place sounds heavenly.
Hawaii is a really nice place, I agree. Have you ever surfed before? because I want to learn how next time.
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